I finished Rogue Golem at lunch yesterday.
Up until then, I’d been thinking that I was going to write a fairly positive report of this book. I was really enjoying it. But when I sat down to eat my Thai orange chicken and read the last 5 or so chapter of this book, my opinion dramatically changed. First, let me describe the initial 80% of the story.
Josh Billings works for a nonspecific government lab doing nonspecific research into some kind of fluids. He has a family and friends, but he feels somewhat disconnected from his life. More and more he feels like his life is predetermined, that he has no choices. He feels like he’s a robot. This feeling intensifies and becomes more crystallized after a few encounters — for example, at a scientific conference he attends a talk on positronic matrices, which starts him thinking about robotic brains, and at a meeting with some military men, one of them treats him somewhat brusquely for reasons that are unclear — this makes him start thinking about conspiracies against him and other such paranoid thoughts. Eventually, he is sent to an asylum where his delusions, as expected, get worse and in some way are fueled by those around him. Next we get to the bad part of the book, but let me digress first.
I really liked Kenyon’s writing here. He uses some clever literary tricks to really pull you into the mind of the character that really enhanced the read for me. For example, many of the characters are not referred to by name, but rather by descriptive sobriquets invented by Billings — his boss is known as The Great Oaf, and his wife as The Wife. This effectively isolated Billings in his world — he doesn’t have conversation with people, but with nebulous beings, and when those people are referred to by name (generally by other people), you’re confused and you’re not sure who is meant. The other thing he does that I liked was to put quotes in the middle of the text, as an a-narrative way to introduce concepts and influence your thinking without giving anything away for sure. At one point the definition of psychosis from the DSM is inserted into the middle of a scene; you’re not sure if the author is saying that Billings is psychotic, or if he’s just giving us background information, or what. It’s not something I’ve seen used before in this way, and I liked it.
OK, so now the situation is that Billings in a mental hospital. Is he a robot who is being oppressed by some massive conspiracy, or is he just a madman? We don’t know. At least not until the book takes a violent turn to the shitty. In a sudden shift not only in story but also in writing style, we learn in no uncertain terms that Billings is indeed a robot, and so are many people around him, including many of his fellow inmates. They stage a daring and action-filled escape and convene at the robot rebellion’s headquarters, where Billings learns that not only is he a robot, he’s a robot that’s been imprinted with mental engrams found in a Tibetan cave. These mental recordings were left there by aliens in the Earth’s prehistory, and allowed Billings to have super powers. He then proceeds to use these super powers to defeat the anti-robot conspiracy and make the world a better place. The end.
I think that Kenyon originally had a real ending but the publishers hired somebody else to rewrite it or something. It’s really a horrible end to an otherwise very good book. Anyways.
I’m now reading Jon Williams’ The Raider, the third in his “Privateers and Gentlemen” series.